I concur with Brian's concerns - I would strongly suggest that the WG chair(s)
take on two responsibilities for this experiment with Gen-ART reviews at WGLC:

(1) Commit to monitoring/mediating the WG mailing list interaction between the
WG members and the Gen-ART reviewer.  Letting the WG membership loose "no holds
barred" on a Gen-ART reviewer who is not an expert in the protocol being 
reviewed
may not work out well, e.g., it could generate list reactions along the lines of
"if the Gen-ART reviewer doesn't understand this basic concept, why should we 
pay
serious attention to anything else in the review?"  I've recently had a behind
the scenes interaction on a technical issue from a Gen-ART review where the
involvement of the responsible WG chair made a significant difference.

(2) Determine whether the draft is mature enough for a Gen-ART review at WGLC.
At a high level, the question to be asked is roughly "if WG LC resulted in no
changes to this draft, would you be comfortable submitting it to your AD with
a publication request?"  If the answer is "no", a Gen-ART review is probably
premature.  A potentially useful mechanism could be to ask the WG chair to
prepare a publication request writeup (Barry's short form should suffice) at
the start of WGLC in order to request a Gen-ART review.  If the WG chair 
believes
that a writeup is premature, then the Gen-ART review is probably also premature.
For example, if a major purpose of a WGLC is to drive open technical issues
to resolution, Gen-ART review is probably premature, and a writeup would note
the open technical issues that need resolution.

Thanks,
--David

> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of
> Brian E Carpenter
> Sent: Thursday, May 23, 2013 10:27 PM
> To: Joel M. Halpern
> Cc: General Area Review Team; The IESG
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] timing of reviews
> 
> On 24/05/2013 11:43, Joel M. Halpern wrote:
> > In principle I am happy perform reviews in conjunction with WG last
> > call, even though that would probably produce a small increase in loading.
> 
> I think time will tell whether it's small. Getting into the thick of
> WG discussion in an area one doesn't know well can be quite a shock
> to the system. That's not to say we shouldn't try it, but I would ask
> for it to be a time-limited experiment initially.
> 
> It seems important to inform WGs explicitly that outside review
> is taking place *and* has to be taken seriously (because if not,
> the same reviewer will be back at a later stage with the same
> questions).
> 
> Then there is a question: will Gen-ART re-review at the time of
> IETF Last Call as well as when the draft reaches the IESG agenda?
> 
> BTW, the concept of early review by Gen-ART is not new, but I think
> it was only tried for one or two drafts in the past.
> 
>     Brian
> 
> >
> > There is however a complication.  Many WG email lists are "ember only",
> > for good reason.  I do not wish to end up on all those lists.  Which
> > means that the moderator has to let the message through, and then
> > probably remember to whitelist the reviewer.  Ad folk have to keep
> > copying the reviewer explicitly with responses.  I think this can be
> > done, but we should remember such procedural glitches.
> >
> > Yours,
> > Joel
> >
> > On 5/23/2013 6:28 PM, Jari Arkko wrote:
> >> Thanks again for all your hard work in doing the reviews. They make
> >> it possible for me to concentrate on reviewing just those documents
> >> where there are problems or I have deeper expertise. And the quality
> >> of the protocol specifications coming out of the IETF is obviously
> >> very important, particularly for protocols that are gaining
> >> significant use.
> >>
> >> As you may have seen, the IESG and the community has been wondering
> >> if there'd be something that we could do about the IETF process, in
> >> the sense that there's quite many things happening at the very end of
> >> the document's life cycle. This results in some surprises, and often
> >> also moves some important decisions out of the working group and to
> >> author/shepherd/AD hands. A while ago we met for the IESG retreat and
> >> wanted to experiment with three specific changes:
> >>
> >> - sending work back to the WGs when significant changes are needed,
> >> and making the WG the central place of the edits - moving some
> >> directorate reviews earlier, without impact reviewer effort too much
> >> - inviting some of the shepherds onto tele chats
> >>
> >> I am writing to you in order to discuss the second item. How big of a
> >> change would it be to have Gen-ART reviews be invoked during WGLC,
> >> while the documents are still in the working groups? The goal of the
> >> reviews would still be the same, e.g., I would be checking that the
> >> reviews were positive and/or that the issues brought up have been
> >> properly addressed.
> >>
> >> There are important details to consider, however, and I would like to
> >> get your feedback on how you would seem them having an effect, and
> >> what would be the best way to organise this, if we decide to go ahead
> >> with the change for the Gen-ART.
> >>
> >> Triggering the review would have to be done by something else than
> >> IETF last call announcement. Is the best approach is to have the WG
> >> chairs manually request for this? Note that sometimes there are
> >> multiple WGLCs. I presume that it would be preferable to have a
> >> Gen-ART review be done only once at this stage, as otherwise the work
> >> load would increase. The chairs may have some idea of whether they
> >> are likely to need another WGLC before they start one.
> >>
> >> There may be possibly bigger changes and time lag between the first
> >> Gen-ART review and the one that checks that the changes are ok.
> >>
> >> Some specs may not make it through WGLC, and a review at that stage
> >> may increase the effort you guys are putting in, by reviewing those
> >> specs that will fail.
> >>
> >> Jari
> >>
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