On Fri, Mar 12, 2010 at 7:21 PM, mattschinkel <[email protected]>wrote:
> We have now updated The Tutorial Book to version 0.3 > > This book is available as a PDF file, you can download it from jallib > project page: http://jallib.googlecode.com/files/Tutorial_Book_0.3.pdf > > I've read it quite fast. It will become a good tutorial book, however there are a few things which maybe you'll try to modify on next versions: 1. page 51, you refer to "plenty resources" and the link goes to google search page for "i2c". It suppose a reader of this tutorial knows to search on google using keywords, else he never find the tutorial itself... "this page" is a very good resource, however maybe deserve a full name, so the reader remember next time where is going. 2. the unnamed figure (btw, any image, formula or table should have a name, so you can refer at it in the tutorial text or talking about it on email) from page 52 has a low resolution, try to use at least 300dpi when export bitmap from eagle and convert it in grayscale, it's much better visible 3. on page 53 two pictures repeat (they aren't numbered as well), in one of them you point at some resistors without naming those resistors as R4 and R3 (I've told you this last time too), on every schematic or image, being a tutorial, the reader does not need to guess the component numbers or where is pin 1 of the IC. There are more issues, but If you'll try to add at least numbers to the figures and refer in text to the schematics and image numbers when explaining something, will start looking as a tutorial. Vasile -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "jallib" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected]. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/jallib?hl=en.
