Hi, Mandy.

This looks good.  

If you're still looking to shorten up the UOE, what about the following:

Replace "namespace. Such methods are not" 

with "namespace so it is not"?

Replace "As a temporary measure, the 7u40 release notes describe a mechanism"

with "The 7u40 release notes describe a temporary mechanism"

I think that lines 77 and 78 are implied by the previous sentence. 

Thanks,
iris


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