On 6/19/13 11:30 AM, Iris Clark wrote:
Hi, Mandy.
This looks good.
If you're still looking to shorten up the UOE, what about the following:
Replace "namespace. Such methods are not"
with "namespace so it is not"?
Replace "As a temporary measure, the 7u40 release notes describe a mechanism"
with "The 7u40 release notes describe a temporary mechanism"
I think that lines 77 and 78 are implied by the previous sentence.
Thanks. That sounds good. I'll take a final pass on it when I get the
approval to push this fix.
Mandy
Thanks,
iris