On 6/19/13 11:30 AM, Iris Clark wrote:
Hi, Mandy.

This looks good.

If you're still looking to shorten up the UOE, what about the following:

Replace "namespace. Such methods are not"

with "namespace so it is not"?

Replace "As a temporary measure, the 7u40 release notes describe a mechanism"

with "The 7u40 release notes describe a temporary mechanism"

I think that lines 77 and 78 are implied by the previous sentence.

Thanks. That sounds good. I'll take a final pass on it when I get the approval to push this fix.

Mandy

Thanks,
iris



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