----- Original Message ----- > Hi, Mandy. > > This looks good. > > If you're still looking to shorten up the UOE, what about the following: > > Replace "namespace. Such methods are not" > > with "namespace so it is not"? > > Replace "As a temporary measure, the 7u40 release notes describe a mechanism" > > with "The 7u40 release notes describe a temporary mechanism" > > I think that lines 77 and 78 are implied by the previous sentence. > > Thanks, > iris > > >
On a related note, are the "7u40 release notes" part of OpenJDK? Should this webrev not include a patch to them, if so? Thanks, -- Andrew :) Free Java Software Engineer Red Hat, Inc. (http://www.redhat.com) PGP Key: 248BDC07 (https://keys.indymedia.org/) Fingerprint = EC5A 1F5E C0AD 1D15 8F1F 8F91 3B96 A578 248B DC07
