> On 12 May 2015, at 14:22, ermouth <[email protected]> wrote: > >> I left my suggestions here: >> Here are my suggestions: > > Collegues, if you have someone who is a) native English speaker, b) has > skills in writing good copy – could you please ask him/her to review the > source?
Good call, let’s see: https://twitter.com/janl/status/598102651222523904 :) Best Jan -- > > Both @Jan and @Alexander texts have good subtle moments – but they both are > not enough good for landing, sorry. As well as my texts. > > May be @Johs could help? His biz requires strong copy skills, so may be he > has someone in-staff? > >> "Help us" sounds like as we're in catastrophic position (: > > I decided 2 cries are acceptable, 3 is too much ) > > ermouth -- Professional Support for Apache CouchDB: http://www.neighbourhood.ie/couchdb-support/
