On Tue, May 12, 2015 at 5:51 PM, Jan Lehnardt <[email protected]> wrote: >> On 12 May 2015, at 14:29, Jan Lehnardt <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> >>> On 12 May 2015, at 14:22, ermouth <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>>> I left my suggestions here: >>>> Here are my suggestions: >>> >>> Collegues, if you have someone who is a) native English speaker, b) has >>> skills in writing good copy – could you please ask him/her to review the >>> source? >> >> Good call, let’s see: https://twitter.com/janl/status/598102651222523904 :) > > Here’s one: https://gist.github.com/nolanlawson/09cab7798aed9ec9044c
All is perfect! But CouchDB Core text need to be a bit improved: > Help shape the future of CouchDB! There's still plenty of exciting work to be > done on the core database. We use modern tools like JIRA and Github to track > issues and pull requests. Future of CouchDB is shaped not only by core, but Fauxton, Docs, Marketings and all the other cards as well. Statement about "we use ... JIRA and Github to track issues and pull requests" may be read as "We use two issues trackers and that why we have a lot of work to do". Any thoughts? -- ,,,^..^,,,
