Mike Saunders wrote on 13-08-18 16:04:
> On 13/08/2018 15:38, Cor Nouws wrote:
>> Me too. But am not conviced that "Join us" will convince others, will
>> make them understand what is in it for them.
> That's what we can use the individual tweets and posts for, to provide
> specifics. Given the limited space in the banner, I think we shouldn't
> try to do too much and make it cluttered. With the current wording, we
> express:
> 1) What it is
> 2) Who makes it
> 3) That people CAN join in (saving the HOW for individual posts)

Sure - the image serves other posts et cetera.
Besided the HOW, don't forget the "WHY should I".
What about "For you to join" in stead of "Join us"?

> Here's another version with grey text, as suggested by Andreas. I think
> it looks a bit better than the green text:
> https://i.imgur.com/GxqY9h8.png

That's OK too.

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