Hi Cor, On 13/08/2018 23:08, Cor Nouws wrote: >> >> 1) What it is >> 2) Who makes it >> 3) That people CAN join in (saving the HOW for individual posts) > > Sure - the image serves other posts et cetera. > Besided the HOW, don't forget the "WHY should I". > What about "For you to join" in stead of "Join us"?
But then "Free office suite, made by a community, for you to join" doesn't express why either... It just says that you can do it. We could try "Free office suite, made by a community – join us and help to improve it" but then we go back to much longer text... Mike -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: [email protected] Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy
