Hi Cor,

On 13/08/2018 23:08, Cor Nouws wrote:
>>
>> 1) What it is
>> 2) Who makes it
>> 3) That people CAN join in (saving the HOW for individual posts)
> 
> Sure - the image serves other posts et cetera.
> Besided the HOW, don't forget the "WHY should I".
> What about "For you to join" in stead of "Join us"?

But then "Free office suite, made by a community, for you to join"
doesn't express why either... It just says that you can do it. We could
try "Free office suite, made by a community – join us and help to
improve it" but then we go back to much longer text...

Mike

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