Hi everyone, This draft is intended to address all IESG comments. Thanks to the IESG and reviewers for their contributions. A summary of the changes is below, but people may wish to do a side by side review.
Eliot * Small edits to the abstract * Clarity in the introduction that the focus is on protecting the device. * Many grammatical/wording improvements * Clarity when MUD is most effective. * MUD controller -> MUD manager * Normative language boiler plate change * Clarity on what should happen when a MUD manager can't reach a MUD file server * A few reference updates * Clarity on the validity time of a MUD file * Added references to RFCs 5911 and 5912 for SMI changes * one additional data element (documentation) * one change based on an update to the ACL model during its last call * Subsection numbering for node descriptions. * Improved text around "controller", direction-initiated. * Simplified MUD-URL text. * Optional reserved space added to DHCP, LLDP options * Simplified DHCP processing. * A new certificate field to bind the manufacturer certificate to the mud signer. * A content type definition for the SMI. * Updated security considerations.
--- Begin Message ---A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-21.txt has been successfully submitted by Eliot Lear and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-ietf-opsawg-mud Revision: 21 Title: Manufacturer Usage Description Specification Document date: 2018-05-17 Group: opsawg Pages: 60 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-21.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-21 Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-21 Abstract: This memo specifies a component-based architecture for manufacturer usage descriptions (MUD). The goal of MUD is to provide a means for end devices to signal to the network what sort of access and network functionality they require to properly function. The initial focus is on access control. Later work can delve into other aspects. This memo specifies two YANG modules, IPv4 and IPv6 DHCP options, an LLDP TLV, a URL, an X.509 certificate extension and a means to sign and verify the descriptions. Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. The IETF Secretariat
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