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We would like to give this call for review a week timeout with the WG. Please pay special attention to the security changes Eliot has described below when reviewing the new text. We are looking to push this forward EOD on May 25. Thanks. Joe On 5/17/18 11:36, Eliot Lear wrote: > Hi everyone, > > This draft is intended to address all IESG comments. Thanks to the > IESG and reviewers for their contributions. A summary of the > changes is below, but people may wish to do a side by side review. > > Eliot > > > * Small edits to the abstract * Clarity in the introduction that > the focus is on protecting the device. * Many grammatical/wording > improvements * Clarity when MUD is most effective. * MUD controller > -> MUD manager * Normative language boiler plate change * Clarity > on what should happen when a MUD manager can't reach a MUD file > server * A few reference updates * Clarity on the validity time of > a MUD file * Added references to RFCs 5911 and 5912 for SMI > changes * one additional data element (documentation) * one change > based on an update to the ACL model during its last call * > Subsection numbering for node descriptions. * Improved text around > "controller", direction-initiated. * Simplified MUD-URL text. * > Optional reserved space added to DHCP, LLDP options * Simplified > DHCP processing. * A new certificate field to bind the manufacturer > certificate to the mud signer. * A content type definition for the > SMI. * Updated security considerations. > > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iF0EARECAB0WIQTMiWQHc8wChijkr7lvaI+K/hTPhwUCWv6vBgAKCRBvaI+K/hTP hwzAAJ4gQdPZ93IFCwO7nWOca4gu7xbwkwCeJPLWlBoGGKDtuQp8sUHVJy+2lmY= =CyhD -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
