Hi Bob: Boy, your 9 pic essay really is great. The sequencing looks good
to me. You know, I really like this shot
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/content/_A039925_large.html, which is
not in your 2nd edit. Just a thought--really all the pics in the 2nd edit
are great. I have no idea what to suggest for a "stronger clincher."
Clearly your RPS workshop will be of more help to you than I just was.
Anyway, I think you're off to a great start. Really enjoyed seeing these.
Cheers, Christine
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From: "Bob W" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: "'Pentax-Discuss Mail List'" <[email protected]>
Sent: Sunday, October 12, 2008 6:01 AM
Subject: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I have
decided that I will probably make 2 mini-essays, presented as a
slideshow, one of which will be about the tanneries - 6-8 pictures.
Here is my 2nd edit of the tanneries section, done as a Flash gallery
so you can see approximately how the slideshow will work:
http://www.web-options.com/RPSTanneries/
I'd welcome your thoughts about the content, sequencing and so on. It
will need to lose some pictures, but I will take part in an RPS
workshop later this month where I will discuss what is strongest -
your views are important to me though (I sound like a call centre!).
My main feeling about this one is that it really needs a stronger
clincher to close the set.
Fire away!
Thanks,
Bob
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