On Sun, Oct 12, 2008 at 7:01 AM, Bob W <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez: > http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/ > > For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I have > decided that I will probably make 2 mini-essays, presented as a > slideshow, one of which will be about the tanneries - 6-8 pictures. > > Here is my 2nd edit of the tanneries section, done as a Flash gallery > so you can see approximately how the slideshow will work: > http://www.web-options.com/RPSTanneries/ > > I'd welcome your thoughts about the content, sequencing and so on. It > will need to lose some pictures, but I will take part in an RPS > workshop later this month where I will discuss what is strongest - > your views are important to me though (I sound like a call centre!). > > My main feeling about this one is that it really needs a stronger > clincher to close the set. > > Fire away!
I can't help you much with order or culling, I just wanted to say that this is a wonderful series of photos. I don't envy you in trying to hone it down to 6 to 8 photos... cheers, frank -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
