Not sure I understand the criteria for success in this context, but
among these 9 images, I think the "strongest" and the one I would end
a mini-show with is #7. The bright yellow is a nice exclamation point
behind what has been mostly muted colors.
stan
On Oct 15, 2008, at 5:41 PM, David J Brooks wrote:
Very nice Bob.
As Frank said, i don't envy the thought of editing those to 8-9
photos.
Dave
On Sun, Oct 12, 2008 at 7:01 AM, Bob W <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I
have
decided that I will probably make 2 mini-essays, presented as a
slideshow, one of which will be about the tanneries - 6-8 pictures.
Here is my 2nd edit of the tanneries section, done as a Flash gallery
so you can see approximately how the slideshow will work:
http://www.web-options.com/RPSTanneries/
I'd welcome your thoughts about the content, sequencing and so on. It
will need to lose some pictures, but I will take part in an RPS
workshop later this month where I will discuss what is strongest -
your views are important to me though (I sound like a call centre!).
My main feeling about this one is that it really needs a stronger
clincher to close the set.
Fire away!
Thanks,
Bob
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