I agree - I think a portrait of one of the workers would be very effective as a clincher for the tanneries shots. Unfortunately I haven't got one - I wasn't shooting to a plan, so I never thought of it. I lie awake at night kicking myself for not getting a portrait of a knackered-looking worker, but we live and learn. I will continue the search for a clincher though.
Thanks for your comments - very helpful. And the flattery too :o) Bob > -----Original Message----- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On > Behalf Of Bob Sullivan > Sent: 15 October 2008 16:57 > To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List > Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please. > > Bob, > All the Fez photos are very accomplished and the series are > interesting. > I think the problem with the clincher is not having a very > close photo. > Perhaps some link of portrait would be too cliche, but I yearn for a > closer contact. > Of course, this is not so easy to get... > Thanks for posting these. I always learn by watching what > you're doing. > Regards, Bob S. [...] > >> > > >> > Here is my 2nd edit of the tanneries section, done as a > >> Flash gallery > >> > so you can see approximately how the slideshow will work: > >> > http://www.web-options.com/RPSTanneries/ > >> > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
