Brock Pytlik wrote:
New webrev at:
http://cr.opensolaris.org/~bpytlik/ips-3718-v2/

Shawn, I took several looks at those lines whose formatting you thought were strange, and I didn't see anything wrong with them. Would you take a look at this webrev and see if the concerns are still there, and if so, what's wrong?

Other changes include adding check_be_name as a static method of the API class and adding more text to the man page.

man/pkg.1.txt:
  lines 26-27, 106: can you alphabetise the options?

lines 108-118: i think it would be far more readable to separate the "with -flag" text by newlines as we did for image-create.

client.py:
  lines 477-478: can you alphabetise the options?

client/api_errors.py:
lines 277-278: suggest rewording as "Unable to clone the current boot environment."

  lines 287-292: suggest reformatting, rewording as:

return _("Unable to rename the boot environment currently named "
    "%(orig)s to %(dest)s.") % { "orig": self.original_name,
    "dest": self.destination_name }

...I think that's the "right" way.  Danek would know.

  lines 301-302: don't use ' characters to quote key names, always use "
      you included the % {} within the _(); it needs to be outside that
      there should always be a space after : characters in dicts

Cheers,
--
Shawn Walker
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