On 29 Mar 2021, at 10:30, Leo Vegoda wrote:

I have been keeping track of the comments so the TF has a good idea of what
changes we need to make to the draft. I've tabulated them below and it
would be good if people could let me know if I have misunderstood what they
meant. …

This is an excellent way of making progress. I’ll emulate it in the future. Well done!

You have understood me correctly.

I support the suggestions of Eileen, Randy, Vesna, Sasha and Fearghas. In particular I support Vesna’s suggestion that you paraphrased as “call to action”.

Daniel

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