Thanks for the suggestions. In terms of the logo. Right now the issue is that the only graphic we have is on a solid white background. It's not transparent at all. I want to work on getting the source art for that so that we can do with it what we like. In my opinion, it looked very boring, with black / blue text on a really light background. My actual hope is to get the source art for the logo, (or make a new one) and have it inverted so that it is also white. At that point I would make the background a gradient blue.
As for the typos, I will fix those. As for the navigation, I will try it on the left. ~Michael. On Jun 12, 2012, at 9:50 AM, Ali Lown wrote: > Michael, > > Style: > --------- > Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that > when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not > showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right). > > Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white > text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo > background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change > text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a > light grey (#eee)? > > Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me > (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently? > > Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image so > it doesn't take up quite so much screen space? > > Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might I > suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate them > from the text. > > Spelling + Grammar + Consistency: > ---------------------------------------------------- > Home page: > - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed' > - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative' > - 'seemless' -> 'seamless' > - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid' > - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots and > Gadgets' > - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform' > - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability' > - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB' > - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation' > - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related' > - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project' > - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation' > - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community' > - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting Involved' > > About page: > 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol' > 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to create > an integrated' > 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email' > 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally' > '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies' > 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well' > 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand' > 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying' > 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported it' > 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant to be a > new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own > server' > 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase > "FedOne" as a reference' > 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur' > 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' > 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses' > 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people' > 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus' > 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' > > Getting Involved page: > Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved' > 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest' > 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the' > 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for the > future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where we > discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and > consider the health of the community.' > - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements' > > Mailing Lists page: > 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code' > 'collectiely' -> collectively' > 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list' > > Demo Servers page: > 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability' > > That should be enough fixes for one email. :) > Ali > > On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> wrote: >> All, >> >> I have made some updates to the web site. They can be viewed in the staging >> build here: >> >> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html >> >> Let me know what you think. I will publish these changes after I get some >> feedback. There is more work to be done (lots) but I think this looks a >> little nicer than what I had done before. >> >> ~Michael
