Great. I just added a few more changes....fixed the typo. I need to get spell check working in vim. lol.
On Jun 12, 2012, at 12:21 PM, Ali Lown wrote: > Looks better. > Having the menu on the left also makes the logo's white background fit > better with the page. The command boxes help tidy the page too. > > I can see 'reposiotyr' in the text though... > > Ali > > On 12 June 2012 20:18, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> wrote: >> More updates: >> >> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/source-code.html >> >> On Jun 12, 2012, at 10:28 AM, Yuri Z wrote: >> >>> Great work Michael, thanks. >>> Regarding the incubator disclaimer - I think the Apache requirement is that >>> it should be on top. >>> >>> On Tue, Jun 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM, Ali Lown <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>>> Michael, >>>> >>>> Style: >>>> --------- >>>> Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that >>>> when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not >>>> showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right). >>>> >>>> Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white >>>> text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo >>>> background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change >>>> text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a >>>> light grey (#eee)? >>>> >>>> Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me >>>> (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently? >>>> >>>> Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image so >>>> it doesn't take up quite so much screen space? >>>> >>>> Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might I >>>> suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate them >>>> from the text. >>>> >>>> Spelling + Grammar + Consistency: >>>> ---------------------------------------------------- >>>> Home page: >>>> - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed' >>>> - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative' >>>> - 'seemless' -> 'seamless' >>>> - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid' >>>> - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots and >>>> Gadgets' >>>> - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform' >>>> - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability' >>>> - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB' >>>> - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation' >>>> - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related' >>>> - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project' >>>> - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation' >>>> - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community' >>>> - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting Involved' >>>> >>>> About page: >>>> 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol' >>>> 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to create >>>> an integrated' >>>> 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email' >>>> 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally' >>>> '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies' >>>> 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well' >>>> 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand' >>>> 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying' >>>> 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported it' >>>> 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant to be a >>>> new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own >>>> server' >>>> 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase >>>> "FedOne" as a reference' >>>> 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur' >>>> 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >>>> 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses' >>>> 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people' >>>> 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus' >>>> 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >>>> >>>> Getting Involved page: >>>> Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved' >>>> 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest' >>>> 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the' >>>> 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for the >>>> future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where we >>>> discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and >>>> consider the health of the community.' >>>> - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements' >>>> >>>> Mailing Lists page: >>>> 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code' >>>> 'collectiely' -> collectively' >>>> 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list' >>>> >>>> Demo Servers page: >>>> 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability' >>>> >>>> That should be enough fixes for one email. :) >>>> Ali >>>> >>>> On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> >>>> wrote: >>>>> All, >>>>> >>>>> I have made some updates to the web site. They can be viewed in the >>>> staging build here: >>>>> >>>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html >>>>> >>>>> Let me know what you think. I will publish these changes after I get >>>> some feedback. There is more work to be done (lots) but I think this looks >>>> a little nicer than what I had done before. >>>>> >>>>> ~Michael >>>> >>
