Yeah. I didn't write most of this content...
On Jun 12, 2012, at 12:30 PM, Ali Lown wrote: > Might I suggest you simply proof-read instead? Spell checkers are > always a bit of a curse with respect to actually getting the correct > spellings! > > PS. Nope, I am not a graphic designer. > > On 12 June 2012 20:28, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> wrote: >> Great. I just added a few more changes....fixed the typo. I need to get >> spell check working in vim. lol. >> >> >> On Jun 12, 2012, at 12:21 PM, Ali Lown wrote: >> >>> Looks better. >>> Having the menu on the left also makes the logo's white background fit >>> better with the page. The command boxes help tidy the page too. >>> >>> I can see 'reposiotyr' in the text though... >>> >>> Ali >>> >>> On 12 June 2012 20:18, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> >>> wrote: >>>> More updates: >>>> >>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/source-code.html >>>> >>>> On Jun 12, 2012, at 10:28 AM, Yuri Z wrote: >>>> >>>>> Great work Michael, thanks. >>>>> Regarding the incubator disclaimer - I think the Apache requirement is >>>>> that >>>>> it should be on top. >>>>> >>>>> On Tue, Jun 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM, Ali Lown <[email protected]> wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> Michael, >>>>>> >>>>>> Style: >>>>>> --------- >>>>>> Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that >>>>>> when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not >>>>>> showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right). >>>>>> >>>>>> Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white >>>>>> text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo >>>>>> background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change >>>>>> text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a >>>>>> light grey (#eee)? >>>>>> >>>>>> Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me >>>>>> (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently? >>>>>> >>>>>> Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image so >>>>>> it doesn't take up quite so much screen space? >>>>>> >>>>>> Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might I >>>>>> suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate them >>>>>> from the text. >>>>>> >>>>>> Spelling + Grammar + Consistency: >>>>>> ---------------------------------------------------- >>>>>> Home page: >>>>>> - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed' >>>>>> - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative' >>>>>> - 'seemless' -> 'seamless' >>>>>> - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid' >>>>>> - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots and >>>>>> Gadgets' >>>>>> - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform' >>>>>> - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability' >>>>>> - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB' >>>>>> - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation' >>>>>> - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related' >>>>>> - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project' >>>>>> - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation' >>>>>> - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community' >>>>>> - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting Involved' >>>>>> >>>>>> About page: >>>>>> 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol' >>>>>> 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to create >>>>>> an integrated' >>>>>> 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email' >>>>>> 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally' >>>>>> '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies' >>>>>> 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well' >>>>>> 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand' >>>>>> 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying' >>>>>> 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported it' >>>>>> 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant to be a >>>>>> new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own >>>>>> server' >>>>>> 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase >>>>>> "FedOne" as a reference' >>>>>> 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur' >>>>>> 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >>>>>> 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses' >>>>>> 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people' >>>>>> 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus' >>>>>> 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >>>>>> >>>>>> Getting Involved page: >>>>>> Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved' >>>>>> 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest' >>>>>> 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the' >>>>>> 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for the >>>>>> future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where we >>>>>> discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and >>>>>> consider the health of the community.' >>>>>> - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements' >>>>>> >>>>>> Mailing Lists page: >>>>>> 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code' >>>>>> 'collectiely' -> collectively' >>>>>> 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list' >>>>>> >>>>>> Demo Servers page: >>>>>> 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability' >>>>>> >>>>>> That should be enough fixes for one email. :) >>>>>> Ali >>>>>> >>>>>> On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> >>>>>> wrote: >>>>>>> All, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> I have made some updates to the web site. They can be viewed in the >>>>>> staging build here: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Let me know what you think. I will publish these changes after I get >>>>>> some feedback. There is more work to be done (lots) but I think this >>>>>> looks >>>>>> a little nicer than what I had done before. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> ~Michael >>>>>> >>>> >>
