More updates: http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/source-code.html
On Jun 12, 2012, at 10:28 AM, Yuri Z wrote: > Great work Michael, thanks. > Regarding the incubator disclaimer - I think the Apache requirement is that > it should be on top. > > On Tue, Jun 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM, Ali Lown <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Michael, >> >> Style: >> --------- >> Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that >> when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not >> showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right). >> >> Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white >> text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo >> background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change >> text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a >> light grey (#eee)? >> >> Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me >> (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently? >> >> Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image so >> it doesn't take up quite so much screen space? >> >> Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might I >> suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate them >> from the text. >> >> Spelling + Grammar + Consistency: >> ---------------------------------------------------- >> Home page: >> - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed' >> - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative' >> - 'seemless' -> 'seamless' >> - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid' >> - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots and >> Gadgets' >> - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform' >> - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability' >> - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB' >> - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation' >> - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related' >> - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project' >> - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation' >> - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community' >> - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting Involved' >> >> About page: >> 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol' >> 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to create >> an integrated' >> 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email' >> 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally' >> '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies' >> 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well' >> 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand' >> 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying' >> 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported it' >> 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant to be a >> new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own >> server' >> 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase >> "FedOne" as a reference' >> 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur' >> 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >> 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses' >> 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people' >> 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus' >> 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >> >> Getting Involved page: >> Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved' >> 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest' >> 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the' >> 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for the >> future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where we >> discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and >> consider the health of the community.' >> - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements' >> >> Mailing Lists page: >> 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code' >> 'collectiely' -> collectively' >> 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list' >> >> Demo Servers page: >> 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability' >> >> That should be enough fixes for one email. :) >> Ali >> >> On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> >> wrote: >>> All, >>> >>> I have made some updates to the web site. They can be viewed in the >> staging build here: >>> >>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html >>> >>> Let me know what you think. I will publish these changes after I get >> some feedback. There is more work to be done (lots) but I think this looks >> a little nicer than what I had done before. >>> >>> ~Michael >>
