Might I suggest you simply proof-read instead? Spell checkers are always a bit of a curse with respect to actually getting the correct spellings!
PS. Nope, I am not a graphic designer. On 12 June 2012 20:28, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> wrote: > Great. I just added a few more changes....fixed the typo. I need to get > spell check working in vim. lol. > > > On Jun 12, 2012, at 12:21 PM, Ali Lown wrote: > >> Looks better. >> Having the menu on the left also makes the logo's white background fit >> better with the page. The command boxes help tidy the page too. >> >> I can see 'reposiotyr' in the text though... >> >> Ali >> >> On 12 June 2012 20:18, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> wrote: >>> More updates: >>> >>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/source-code.html >>> >>> On Jun 12, 2012, at 10:28 AM, Yuri Z wrote: >>> >>>> Great work Michael, thanks. >>>> Regarding the incubator disclaimer - I think the Apache requirement is that >>>> it should be on top. >>>> >>>> On Tue, Jun 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM, Ali Lown <[email protected]> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Michael, >>>>> >>>>> Style: >>>>> --------- >>>>> Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that >>>>> when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not >>>>> showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right). >>>>> >>>>> Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white >>>>> text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo >>>>> background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change >>>>> text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a >>>>> light grey (#eee)? >>>>> >>>>> Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me >>>>> (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently? >>>>> >>>>> Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image so >>>>> it doesn't take up quite so much screen space? >>>>> >>>>> Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might I >>>>> suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate them >>>>> from the text. >>>>> >>>>> Spelling + Grammar + Consistency: >>>>> ---------------------------------------------------- >>>>> Home page: >>>>> - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed' >>>>> - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative' >>>>> - 'seemless' -> 'seamless' >>>>> - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid' >>>>> - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots and >>>>> Gadgets' >>>>> - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform' >>>>> - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability' >>>>> - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB' >>>>> - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation' >>>>> - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related' >>>>> - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project' >>>>> - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation' >>>>> - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community' >>>>> - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting Involved' >>>>> >>>>> About page: >>>>> 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol' >>>>> 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to create >>>>> an integrated' >>>>> 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email' >>>>> 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally' >>>>> '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies' >>>>> 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well' >>>>> 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand' >>>>> 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying' >>>>> 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported it' >>>>> 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant to be a >>>>> new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own >>>>> server' >>>>> 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase >>>>> "FedOne" as a reference' >>>>> 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur' >>>>> 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >>>>> 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses' >>>>> 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people' >>>>> 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus' >>>>> 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >>>>> >>>>> Getting Involved page: >>>>> Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved' >>>>> 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest' >>>>> 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the' >>>>> 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for the >>>>> future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where we >>>>> discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and >>>>> consider the health of the community.' >>>>> - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements' >>>>> >>>>> Mailing Lists page: >>>>> 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code' >>>>> 'collectiely' -> collectively' >>>>> 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list' >>>>> >>>>> Demo Servers page: >>>>> 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability' >>>>> >>>>> That should be enough fixes for one email. :) >>>>> Ali >>>>> >>>>> On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> >>>>> wrote: >>>>>> All, >>>>>> >>>>>> I have made some updates to the web site. They can be viewed in the >>>>> staging build here: >>>>>> >>>>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html >>>>>> >>>>>> Let me know what you think. I will publish these changes after I get >>>>> some feedback. There is more work to be done (lots) but I think this >>>>> looks >>>>> a little nicer than what I had done before. >>>>>> >>>>>> ~Michael >>>>> >>> >
