Looks better. Having the menu on the left also makes the logo's white background fit better with the page. The command boxes help tidy the page too.
I can see 'reposiotyr' in the text though... Ali On 12 June 2012 20:18, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> wrote: > More updates: > > http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/source-code.html > > On Jun 12, 2012, at 10:28 AM, Yuri Z wrote: > >> Great work Michael, thanks. >> Regarding the incubator disclaimer - I think the Apache requirement is that >> it should be on top. >> >> On Tue, Jun 12, 2012 at 7:50 PM, Ali Lown <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> Michael, >>> >>> Style: >>> --------- >>> Change the CSS on body to have "padding: 10px 0px;" instead so that >>> when not centered (think smaller/split screen) a left margin is not >>> showing (keeping it symmetrical with the right). >>> >>> Not sure having the logo on the white background next to the white >>> text on a blue background is the best choice. Since making the logo >>> background transparent would make it impossible to see, perhaps change >>> text color to the blue, and set the background of the header to a >>> light grey (#eee)? >>> >>> Putting the navigation on the right hand side seems awkward for me >>> (native LTR reader). Perhaps RTL readers would view this differently? >>> >>> Could we have the disclaimer text flow around the incubator image so >>> it doesn't take up quite so much screen space? >>> >>> Source Code page: What is happening with all the blank lines? Might I >>> suggest putting each of the commands in a little box to seperate them >>> from the text. >>> >>> Spelling + Grammar + Consistency: >>> ---------------------------------------------------- >>> Home page: >>> - 'wave is ditributed' -> -'wave is a distributed' >>> - 'collabortative' -> 'collaborative' >>> - 'seemless' -> 'seamless' >>> - 'promotes more a fluid...' -> 'promotes a more fluid' >>> - 'The addition of Robots, and Gadgets' -> 'The addition of Robots and >>> Gadgets' >>> - 'Wave platorm' -> 'Wave platform' >>> - 'customizablilty' -> 'customizability' >>> - 'WiaB) -> 'WIAB' >>> - 'reference impelemntation' -> 'reference implementation' >>> - 'other wave related' -> 'other Wave related' >>> - 'The wave project' -> 'The Wave project' >>> - 'better documenation' -> 'better documentation' >>> - 'joiing the comunity' -> 'joining the community' >>> - 'please se the Get Involved page' -> 'please see the Getting Involved' >>> >>> About page: >>> 'Wave Federation protocol' -> 'Wave Federation Protocol' >>> 'Google's attempt to create integrated' -> 'Google's attempt to create >>> an integrated' >>> 'more efficient then email' -> 'more efficient than email' >>> 'the messages arnt literally' -> 'the messages aren't literally' >>> '10 different copys' -> '10 different copies' >>> 'itself a already well' -> 'itself an already well' >>> 'but its important to understand' -> 'but it is important to understand' >>> 'underlyeing' -> 'underlying' >>> 'and server's that supported it' -> 'and servers that supported it' >>> 'FedOne Allthough Googles own server' -> I think this is meant to be a >>> new heading 'FedOne' with a line starting 'Although Google's own >>> server' >>> 'they did release "FedOne" was a reference' -> 'they did relase >>> "FedOne" as a reference' >>> 'there is still a few amateur' -> 'there are still a few amateur' >>> 'Wave In a Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >>> 'potential use's' -> 'potential uses' >>> 'combined with a many people' -> 'combined with many people' >>> 'Apache Waves main focus' -> 'Apache Wave's main focus' >>> 'Wave-In-A-Box' -> 'Wave in a Box' >>> >>> Getting Involved page: >>> Title 'Getting Invovled' -> 'Getting Involved' >>> 'Thanks for your interest' -> 'Thank you for your interest' >>> 'involved to to joing the' -> 'involved is to join the' >>> 'It is here where we discuss the code, protocols design, plans for the >>> future, and the health of the community.' -> 'It is here where we >>> discuss the code, design the protocols, plan for the future and >>> consider the health of the community.' >>> - 'Requriements Discussion' -> 'Discuss Requirements' >>> >>> Mailing Lists page: >>> 'disucss code' -> 'discuss code' >>> 'collectiely' -> collectively' >>> 'the mailing lis' -> 'the mailing list' >>> >>> Demo Servers page: >>> 'varying degree's of stability' -> 'varying degrees of stability' >>> >>> That should be enough fixes for one email. :) >>> Ali >>> >>> On 12 June 2012 17:03, Michael MacFadden <[email protected]> >>> wrote: >>>> All, >>>> >>>> I have made some updates to the web site. They can be viewed in the >>> staging build here: >>>> >>>> http://wave.staging.apache.org/wave/index.html >>>> >>>> Let me know what you think. I will publish these changes after I get >>> some feedback. There is more work to be done (lots) but I think this looks >>> a little nicer than what I had done before. >>>> >>>> ~Michael >>> >
