You'll have to forgive me if I sound arrogant
You don't sound arrogant to me, Alan. You've done just what we want reviewers to do: look at the chapter critically.
All of your comments are really good ones, and in at least one case ("No vendor lock-in") you suggested a good way to modify a phrase that until yesterday had a note attached to it saying approximately "this could be worded better, but I'm not sure what to say". Thank you!
You'll also have to forgive me for not following procedure for the time being
No problem. A note to the list works fine, esp. for the sort of comments you've made.
I'll update the file today and put it back on the review list.
Would you like to try the Mail Merge chapter next? It's been through several reviews, but I haven't had a chance to go through it myself, so I don't know how close it is to being publishable. (It's the first item on the review list.)
Regards, Jean
