On 20 Aug 2011, at 14:49, Alexander Thurgood wrote:

> Le 20/08/11 11:34, Florian Effenberger a écrit :
> 
> Hi Florian,
> 
>> "LibreOffice" and "The Document Foundation" are registered trademarks of
>> their corresponding registered owners or are in actual use as trademarks
>> in one or more countries. Their respective logos and icons are subject
>> to international copyright laws. The use of these therefore are subject
>> to our trademark policy."
> 
> I would only change the last sentence to :
> "The use of these intellectual property rights as a whole is laid out in
> our trademark policy."

As a matter of general style I believe TDF should not use the controversial 
expression "intellectual property" anywhere. I suggest the following phrase:

> "LibreOffice" and "The Document Foundation" are registered trademarks of
> their corresponding registered owners or are in actual use as trademarks
> in one or more countries. Their respective logos and icons are also subject
> to international copyright laws. Uses are explained our trademark policy."

Cheers,

S.


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