Hi Andrew,
The updated document is much improved. I noticed at least a couple of
things Dave mentioned in his review comments are not yet fixed. I assume
you will be updating those later. I have a few comments with this
version of the document.
Requirements, bullet 3 and bullet 5: I think it is more clear to combine
thsee 2 requirements. Also, please specify whether the image will be usable
for media-based AI install and media-based text install or not.
Overview: I think it flows better to switch the 1st and 2nd paragraph
around.
Overview, 1st paragraph: Why group the changes as server and client side
changes? Why not be explicit and talk about which component changes will
be made, DC, SMF service scripts and ICT. Then, have subsections below
talking
about changes in each of the components.
Use cases: It would be good to have a use case that shows
how one would setup the service to use the network based text installer.
I understand that it should be the same as setting up an AI service,
but it doesn't hurt to show an example here, so, for those that looks
for example of how to use the network based text installer,
they have all the information in one place.
Thanks,
--Karen
On 08/10/10 08:49 AM, Andrew Gracey wrote:
I have uploaded a second version of the design document, please give
some more feedback.
http://hub.opensolaris.org/bin/view/Project+caiman/Network+Text+Installer
Thank you,
Andrew Gracey
On Tue, Aug 3, 2010 at 11:37 AM, Andrew Gracey <[email protected]
<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Hi,
We have attached the first draft of the design document here
<http://hub.opensolaris.org/bin/view/Project+caiman/Network+Text+Installer>.
We would like feedback by August 10th.
Thank you,
Andrew Gracey
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