On Fri, Jun 10, 2011 at 7:32 AM, David Ramsey <pooka...@gmail.com> wrote: > [Notes: Due to the confusion over "mortification", I went with > "mortification of the flesh", as it's clearer. Also, the mentions of > cleansing and purity may seem to overlap with the good gods, but this is > deliberate: I'm trying to turn the concepts upside down, as this would > fit Makhleb's chaotic nature. Furthermore, there are only so many good > synonyms for them.]
Amusingly, my only comment was going to be 'it sounds great, but the mentioning of cleansing might be out of place' -- until I read your message. Perhaps we could clarify as to what the actual cleansing is? "Cleanse others of order by inflicting suffering and death", perhaps -- seeing as his intent is chaos. [snip] -J ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ EditLive Enterprise is the world's most technically advanced content authoring tool. Experience the power of Track Changes, Inline Image Editing and ensure content is compliant with Accessibility Checking. http://p.sf.net/sfu/ephox-dev2dev _______________________________________________ Crawl-ref-discuss mailing list Crawl-ref-discuss@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/crawl-ref-discuss
