On Fri, Jun 10, 2011 at 8:28 AM, David Ramsey <pooka...@gmail.com> wrote: > Of those two, I like "ravaging" better; what you do to corpses in > Makhleb's name is only considered "desecration" by those heretics who > follow arbitrary laws. :)
...and here's an update of the text: [Notes: The one change from before is to incorporate the suggestion to change sacrificing the dead to ravaging the dead. In the process, I removed the reference to cleansed corpses, because if a monster dies by, say, stepping into a blade trap, Makhleb will still accept its corpse despite its having died in a way that didn't generate piety.] Makhleb the Destroyer is a fearsome God of bloodshed and mortification of the flesh. Followers are expected to cleanse others by inflicting suffering and death on them in Makhleb's name, and can gain further favour by ravaging the freshly dead. Dedicated followers may also access the raw energies and demonic servants of chaos, so that they may better break the impure world and its false laws for this evil God's glory. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ EditLive Enterprise is the world's most technically advanced content authoring tool. Experience the power of Track Changes, Inline Image Editing and ensure content is compliant with Accessibility Checking. http://p.sf.net/sfu/ephox-dev2dev _______________________________________________ Crawl-ref-discuss mailing list Crawl-ref-discuss@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/crawl-ref-discuss
