Some more suggestions changes :)

In the chapter 
http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews/chapter1/
* change installed with Windows (2000/NT/XP) . 
  
  Mutiple comma
* Specifically, , the  
* In system requirements better to add
  - A minimum of 2 GB of available space on your hard drive is recommended.

This is the basic requirement that Sun has mentioned in website but for safer 
side it would be better if we mention we require 4 GB of space required, if you 
choose to install entire distribution.

In the chapter 
http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews/chapter1/ch01s02.html
* Need to remove
   - Figure?1.1.?Backup Process Overview 
   - Deadlink at the right corner

* Better to use -> instead of |
   Start -> Programs -> Accessories -> System Tools and select a utility.

In the chapter 
http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews/chapter1/ch01s03.html
* Need to remove
  - Figure?1.2.?Re-Partitioning Process Overview
  - Deadlink at the right corner

In the chapter 
http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews/chapter3/
* Need to remove step 6
* Note content sub-links in this page are broken need to re-check

* Why Nvidia driver installation procedure is repeated in
   http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews/chapter3/
   and
   
http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews/chapter3/ch01s02.html

   Why do we have different procedures for re-configuring device ?
   In for configuring Nvidia driver section at we mention
   #touch /reconfigure
   #shutdown -i6 -g0 -y

   In configuring Screen resolution section we mention
   #reboot -- -r


Xorg Troubleshooting tip:-
Sometime after the installation of Solaris at first boot, if Xorg/Xsun not 
configured properly dtlogin goes for a toss so user need to reboot the machine 
with "-s" option from grub to land into "Single user" mode re-configure 
Xorg/Xsun.

This is a after installation tip. May be we can include this in next version of 
document.
 
 
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