T?i th?y c? 1 s? v?n ?? trong h?nh:

   1. D?ng ??u ti?n, "...m? ngu?n m? v? ho?n to?n mi?n ph?...", ch?
   "h?an" b? b? d?u sai.
   2. D?ng 2 ?o?n 2, t? "??a CD" ???c d?ng nhi?u h?n l? "d?a CD" (ph??ng
   ng?)
   3. D?ng th? 2 t? d??i l?n "media and shipping" ch?a d?ch (hay kh?ng
   d?ch ???c?).
   4. D?ng th? 3 t? d??i l?n, "canonical" c? l? n?n vi?t hoa?

Xin l?i v? tr?nh ?? ti?ng Anh kh?ng t?t n?n ??nh vi?t ti?ng Vi?t v?y :P.
(Sorry, I'm not good at English :P).

Ng?c Minh.

Va?o nga?y 31/03/2008, Hai Nguyen Thanh <hai2502 at yahoo.com> vi??t:
>
> Hi Ivan,
>
> I just updated Vietnamese text for the cover, attached
> is JPG file for preview.
>
> I read the translated text, mostly it's OK to me and
> understandable. However there are some words that I
> feel need to discuss, as translated IT English into
> Vietnamese is not easy. I modified the text a bit, not
> change the whole meaning, just made it understandable
> and sound "Vietnamese" :). If possible, please ask
> Onishidato about my changes and let me know his
> opinion. Also everybody in the loop please have a look
> at the text and let me know if I need to change any
> thing, all opinions are welcome :)
>
> Secondly, that PSD file used MyriadProWeb font which I
> don't have, then I use a similar Myriad Web font for
> Vietnamese version, I hope it won't make to much
> different.
>
> Hope this helps
>
> Hai
>
> P/S: I'm Fedora's fan :)
>
>
> --- Ivan Garcia <capiscuas at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > Take a look to this artwork to create covers for the
> > CD/DVD of next version
> > of Ubuntu.
> >
>
>
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/Incoming/Hardy/Alternate/DVD_Cover_(Fela_Kuti_Chocolate)#head-3d68dd82b0571e9c097e1b123feb8369ce8bd8a8
> <
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/Incoming/Hardy/Alternate/DVD_Cover_%28Fela_Kuti_Chocolate%29#head-3d68dd82b0571e9c097e1b123feb8369ce8bd8a8
> >
>
> >
> > They have created a photoshop file (PSD) here
> > http://www.filefactory.com/file/c677b2/ . (they say
> > it's not compatible with
> > GIMP thought).
> >
> > My friend Onishidato in HCMC has translated the
> > english text into
> > vietnamese, so if somebody with photoshop will help
> > to change the PSD file
> > into vietnamese that would help us all to have a
> > nice cover to print the day
> > we make Ubuntu New Release Party in Vietnamese
> > cities.
> >
> >
> > Here is the text translated:
> >
> >  Ubuntu linux for human beings: Ubuntu linux cho
> > lo?i ng??i
> >
> > Ubuntu l? g??
> >
> > Ubuntu l? m?t h? ?i?u h?nh bao g?m c?c
> > ph?n m?m m? ngu?n m? v? mi?n ph?. V?i
> > Ubuntu, b?n c? th? l??t web, ??c email,
> > t?o c?c t? li?u, dung b?ng t?nh v?
> > nhi?u ?ng d?ng h?n n?a! Ubuntu cho b?n
> > quy?n v? kh? n?ng linh ??ng trong m?i
> > tr??ng kinh doanh, h?c t?p v? s? d?ng
> > t?i nh?.
> >
> > Ubuntu r?t d? c?i ??t, kh?ng c? virus, v?
> > r?t th?ch h?p cho c?c m?y t?nh
> > x?ch tay, m?y t?nh ?? b?n v? c?c m?y
> > ch?. D?a CD b?n trong s? c?i ??t v?i
> > kho?ng 12 ng?n ng?; v? nhi?u ng?n ng?
> > kh?c lu?n s?n s?ng ?? t?i v?. ??y l?
> > ch??ng tr?nh h? tr? l?u d?i c?a Ubuntu.
> > Nh?ng n?ng c?p an ninh cho phi?n b?n
> > n?y c?a Ubuntu s? c? hi?u l?c trong 3 n?m
> > ??i v?i m?y ?? b?n v? 5 n?m ??i
> > v?i m?y ch?.
> >
> > Nh?ng ?i?u m?i trong phi?n b?n 8.94
> >
> >    - Xorg 7.3
> >    - Linux kernel 2.6.24
> >    - PulseAudio
> >    - Brasero
> >    - Transmission BitTorrent client
> >    - Wubi
> >    - Word Clock Applet
> >    - ?.v? nhi?u h?n th? n?a?.
> >
> >
> >
> > Provides: (???c cung c?p b?i):
> >
> >
> > (This soft?.)
> >
> > Ch??ng tr?nh n?y ???c ph?t h?nh mi?n
> > ph? d??i m?t v?i tho? thu?n. Ch??ng
> > tr?nh ???c cung c?p kh?ng c? b?t k?
> > ??m b?o, kh?ng ???c s? d?ng v?i
> > m?c ??ch
> > kinh doanh ho?c c?c m?c ??ch kh?c. Xem
> > ph?n gi?y ph?p k?m theo trong m?i
> > ph?n m?m ?? bi?t th?m chi ti?t. M?
> > ngu?n cho Ubuntu c? th? ???c t?i xu?ng
> > t?
> > archive.ubuntu.com ho?c c? th? ???c y?u
> > c?u t? canonical v?i m?c gi? c?a
> > media and shipping. Ubuntu, bi?u tr?ng c?a
> > Ubuntu v? Canonical l? b?n quy?n
> > c?a Canonical Ltd. T?t c? nh?ng nh?n hi?u
> > kh?c l? s? h?u ri?ng c?ng ty.
>
> > > _______________________________________________
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