Le lundi 31 mars 2008 ? 22:27 +0700, Lars Adermalm a ?crit : > Hi Hai and Ivan, > > Looks great. Just a few suggestions.
Looks great yes, I love the new artwork > - But more importantly I feel that the bottom text carries the wrong > message and needs a careful review. "It is provided without any > warranty, without even the implied warranty of merchantability or > fitness for a particular purpose" now reads something like "This > programme is provided without any guarantee and may not be used for > commercial or other purposes" :-\ Everybody should knows that Linux can be use for commercial purpose : I suggest to say : ?"It is provided without any warranty, without even the implied warranty of merchantability or fitness for a particular purpose" "This mean that you can use it for any purpose you want, including money making, but don't expect any guarantee" > - Finally a question rather than a suggestion. I read/interpret the > slogan "ubuntu - linux for human beings" as "ubuntu, contrary to other > versions of linux, does not require expert computer skills and can be > used by anybody that can use a PC with other operating systems, i.e. > any human being". "Loai nguoi" I interpret more like "the humanity". > If my interpretation of the intentions of the Canonical is correct, > then perhaps "linux cho moi nguoi" or something the like would be a > better translation. :-\ I think they really meant "for humanity". Quite pretentious I admit. I also like Linux for everybody, it's up to you... > > Good luck / Lars > > Hai Nguyen Thanh wrote: > > Hi Ivan, > > > > I just updated Vietnamese text for the cover, attached > > is JPG file for preview. > > > > I read the translated text, mostly it's OK to me and > > understandable. However there are some words that I > > feel need to discuss, as translated IT English into > > Vietnamese is not easy. I modified the text a bit, not > > change the whole meaning, just made it understandable > > and sound "Vietnamese" :). If possible, please ask > > Onishidato about my changes and let me know his > > opinion. Also everybody in the loop please have a look > > at the text and let me know if I need to change any > > thing, all opinions are welcome :) > > > > Secondly, that PSD file used MyriadProWeb font which I > > don't have, then I use a similar Myriad Web font for > > Vietnamese version, I hope it won't make to much > > different. > > > > Hope this helps > > > > Hai > > > > P/S: I'm Fedora's fan :) > > > > --- Ivan Garcia <capiscuas at gmail.com> wrote: > > > > > > > Take a look to this artwork to create covers for the > > > CD/DVD of next version > > > of Ubuntu. > > > > > > > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/Incoming/Hardy/Alternate/DVD_Cover_(Fela_Kuti_Chocolate)#head-3d68dd82b0571e9c097e1b123feb8369ce8bd8a8<https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/Incoming/Hardy/Alternate/DVD_Cover_%28Fela_Kuti_Chocolate%29#head-3d68dd82b0571e9c097e1b123feb8369ce8bd8a8> > > > > > They have created a photoshop file (PSD) here > > > http://www.filefactory.com/file/c677b2/ . (they say > > > it's not compatible with > > > GIMP thought). > > > > > > My friend Onishidato in HCMC has translated the > > > english text into > > > vietnamese, so if somebody with photoshop will help > > > to change the PSD file > > > into vietnamese that would help us all to have a > > > nice cover to print the day > > > we make Ubuntu New Release Party in Vietnamese > > > cities. > > > > > > > > > Here is the text translated: > > > > > > Ubuntu linux for human beings: Ubuntu linux cho > > > lo? i ng?????i > > > > > > Ubuntu l? g??? > > > > > > Ubuntu l? m???t h??? ??i???u h? nh bao g???m c??c > > > ph???n m???m m?? ngu???n m??? v? mi???n ph??. V???i > > > Ubuntu, b???n c?? th??? l?????t web, ?????c email, > > > t???o c??c t?? li???u, dung b???ng t??nh v? > > > nhi???u ???ng d???ng h??n n???a! Ubuntu cho b???n > > > quy???n v? kh??? n??ng linh ?????ng trong m??i > > > tr?????ng kinh doanh, h???c t???p v? s??? d???ng > > > t???i nh? . > > > > > > Ubuntu r???t d??? c? i ?????t, kh??ng c?? virus, v? > > > r???t th??ch h???p cho c??c m??y t??nh > > > x??ch tay, m??y t??nh ????? b? n v? c??c m??y > > > ch???. D??a CD b??n trong s??? c? i ?????t v???i > > > kho???ng 12 ng??n ng???; v? nhi???u ng??n ng??? > > > kh??c lu??n s???n s? ng ????? t???i v???. ????y l? > > > ch????ng tr??nh h??? tr??? l??u d? i c???a Ubuntu. > > > Nh???ng n??ng c???p an ninh cho phi??n b???n > > > n? y c???a Ubuntu s??? c?? hi???u l???c trong 3 n??m > > > ?????i v???i m??y ????? b? n v? 5 n??m ?????i > > > v???i m??y ch???. > > > > > > Nh???ng ??i???u m???i trong phi??n b???n 8.94 > > > > > > - Xorg 7.3 > > > - Linux kernel 2.6.24 > > > - PulseAudio > > > - Brasero > > > - Transmission BitTorrent client > > > - Wubi > > > - Word Clock Applet > > > - ???.v? nhi???u h??n th??? n???a???. > > > > > > > > > > > > Provides: (???????c cung c???p b???i): > > > > > > > > > (This soft???.) > > > > > > Ch????ng tr??nh n? y ???????c ph??t h? nh mi???n > > > ph?? d?????i m???t v? i tho??? thu???n. Ch????ng > > > tr??nh ???????c cung c???p kh??ng c?? b???t k?? > > > ?????m b???o, kh??ng ???????c s??? d???ng v???i > > > m???c ????ch > > > kinh doanh ho???c c??c m???c ????ch kh??c. Xem > > > ph???n gi???y ph??p k??m theo trong m???i > > > ph???n m???m ????? bi???t th??m chi ti???t. M?? > > > ngu???n cho Ubuntu c?? th??? ???????c t???i xu???ng > > > t??? > > > archive.ubuntu.com ho???c c?? th??? ???????c y??u > > > c???u t??? canonical v???i m???c gi?? c???a > > > media and shipping. Ubuntu, bi???u tr??ng c???a > > > Ubuntu v? Canonical l? b???n quy???n > > > c???a Canonical Ltd. T???t c??? nh???ng nh??n hi???u > > > kh??c l? s??? h???u ri??ng c??ng ty. > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > > > > Discuss mailing list > > > Discuss at saigonlug.org > > > > > > > > http://saigonlug.org/mailman/listinfo/discuss_saigonlug.org > > > > > > > > > > > > ____________________________________________________________________________________ > > Like movies? 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