I'm grappling with how to phrase some things in results sections especially. Because data are an inanimate thing they can't really "show" or "demonstrate" anything. Nor can a study do anything such as "observe" or "define" so what kind of language do you all use. Is there some boilerplate that works.
I have a revision to an APA journal that asked me to fix these things...and I'm struggling with the data especially. Lengthy rewriting of "the study..." Finally fixed some of those problems. It came at a huge cost to precision and concise writing. Annette Sent from my Verizon Wireless Phone --- You are currently subscribed to tips as: [email protected]. To unsubscribe click here: http://fsulist.frostburg.edu/u?id=13090.68da6e6e5325aa33287ff385b70df5d5&n=T&l=tips&o=9499 or send a blank email to leave-9499-13090.68da6e6e5325aa33287ff385b70df...@fsulist.frostburg.edu
