Often, use of first person makes all of this flow better. "Our analysis of the 
data revealed significant effects for both main effects..." see pages 69 and 77 
for explicit examples of first person usage. 

"significant effects for both main effects" what is that?
  Why not state "Analyses  of  the two main variables were statistically 
significant"?

  Michael "omnicentric" Sylvester,PhD
  Daytona Beach,Florida



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