Axil Axil <janap...@gmail.com> wrote: > Cold fusion does not produce carbon dioxide or any other chemical product, > so it would > eliminate the source of global warming. > > Should read > > Cold fusion does not produce carbon dioxide . . . > The essay is limited to 9 pages plus 2 pages of references. I could not say much.
In an essay of this nature, it is a good idea to boil things down and keep the number of pages low. People will not read it otherwise. It is good to be succinct. - Jed
