One trivial note (not affecting the actual text) - remember 3D and 2D will be a lot more easily understood than 3d and 2d, which parse as "third, second".
Looking at the document ... is there a reason the numbers aren't flush with the lines they refer to? It seems a little odd to have. 1. Do step 1. 2. Do the next step rather than 1. Do step 1. 2. Do the next step. Other small issues: * There are some weird linebreaks on p11. * We switch between "Non-commercial" (p12) and "Non-Commercial" (p10) * Can we add links under the three CC licenses listed on p10? They're relatively human-readable - eg creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/ Andrew. On Tuesday, 17 September 2013, Stevie Benton wrote: > Thanks Jonathan. Before I go through the awkward job of tinkering with the > InDesign file, what do other people think about the revision? > > Thank you, > > Stevie > > > On 17 September 2013 12:47, Jonathan Cardy < > [email protected]> wrote: > > Thanks all, > > *Possible revised wording with examples from the borderline and less > repetition. > * > * > UK Freedom of panorama* > > Under UK law, you can photograph, upload and share with the world a > photo of any 3d artifact such as a building or sculpture that is > permanently publicly displayed in the UK, even if the object is still under > copyright. But you need to check four things: > 1 Is it permanently on display? Temporary exhibits such as on the fourth > plinth in Trafalgar square are not included, but the Angel of the North is. > 2 When you took the photograph were you somewhere normally open to the > public? Inside a pub or museum is fine, where you work or were a guest > probably isn't. > 3 Was it 3d not 2d? Buildings and sculpture are 3d, graffiti, paintings > and signs are 2d. So a photograph of stained glass illuminated by light > shining through it is 3d, but the same stained glass window reflecting your > flash at night is 2d and might still be under copyright. > 4 Did you take the photo in the UK? Most other countries have stricter > rules. > > > Regards > > > Jonathan Cardy > GLAM (Galleries, Libraries, Archives & Museums) Organiser/ > Trefnydd GLAM (Galeriau, Llyfrgelloedd, Archifdai a llawer Mwy!) > Wikimedia UK > 0207 065 0990 > > Wikimedia UK is a Company Limited by Guarantee registered in England and > Wales, Registered No. 6741827. Registered Charity No.1144513. Registered > Office 4th Floor, Development House, 56-64 Leonard Street, London EC2A 4LT. > United Kingdom. Wikimedia UK is the UK chapter of a global Wikimedia > movement. The Wikimedia projects are run by the Wikimedia Foundation (who > operate Wikipedia, amongst other projects). > > Wikimedia UK is an independent non-profit charity with no legal control > over Wikipedia nor responsibility for its contents. > > > Press Enter to send your message. > > > On 17 September 2013 11:43, Stevie Benton > <[email protected]>wrote: > > Thanks again everyone for all of your input. As there is still some > correspondence going around the booklet I'm going to leave it open for > comments until 12pm tomorrow. At that point, I plan to close the discussion > and prepare a final proof before sending to the printers and uploading to > Commons. > > Thank you, > > Stevie > > > On 17 September 2013 10:40, Edward Hands <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thank you Martin for your kind words. Harry's edit a > > -- - Andrew Gray [email protected]
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