Hi Mike-

I'm nearly dumb-struck; your commentary lines are fantastic. How on
earth could I mind? (and if no-one "minds" it doesn't "matter") Your
lines also are full of zen. 

Margie (roloro1557)

--- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com, mike brown <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hi Margie,
> I love your poem! The objective nature of it makes it full of zen. I
hope you don't mind but I've taken the liberty of writing a commentary
to each line just for fun :)  Mike. 
> reality comes in on little cat feet (and takes flight when big dog
feet notice)
> or bolts of lightning (which pierce absolutely nothing, but makes a
hole for the light to come in)
> it plays across the strings of violins (when no-one hears)
> and drives to the bakery for a loaf of bread (yet the road moves and
the car does not)
> it trickles down faces in tears (laughter or sadness without
> and lurks in the dirt on the rug (like the shit on a stick)
> it moves in the wagging tail of a dog (a teaching beyond words)
> or finds voice in the song of a bird (a cry that swallows the whole


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