the image of mountains as folds on a cloth
 
No, that's not one of mine, though I have used the idea of fold in cloth, but as an _expression_ of desire, rather than mountains.
It's interesting how one can associate ideas, I have discovered while looking for something else that I have written a whole collection of poems which are to do with the beach as a symbol of love. 
Here's one that is new:
 

LOVERS ON BLUE FIELD

  

The white cover spills across the floor,

its surf rolling over  the flotsam

of our clothes. Blue sheets pleat softly

into the ripples of desire.

 

Outside, the afternoon sea still glitters;

clouds leave their long shadows

dropped across the shimmer

like garments cast off in haste.

 

We recline, swimmers at rest,

watching clouds couple with the sea,

spawning more ripples,

and the shuddering, lusting waves.  

 

 

Jane Bhandari 


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