On 27.11.2016 04:37, William Hale wrote: > Hi All, > > I skimmed through the thread and have a few comments based on the most > recent script. Overall, I am happy that we dropped any deep > explaination and most of the snow analogy. Below is my suggestion > followed by the inline comments that built it. > > --- > > SUGGESTION/ > > When goods such as software, multimedia, and research are released > freely and for altrustic reasons, everyone is able to enjoy and benefit > from them.
"altruistic" seems problematic. We are about paying people - hopefully even well. > > But who pays for this content to be developed and sustained? > > Snowdrift.coop's revolutionary crowdmatching platform empowers you to > join with others to fund the public goods /you/ want created. > > You pledge to donate a tiny amount, with a preset limit, every month, > for each patron who supports a project with you. > > Your donation is matched by others in the growing community, building > consensus that directs support to the most promising projects. "growing" is a tiny bit too optimistic right now. We are just starting - so "growing" probably means we hope the best. > > Join us in clearing the path to a free and open future! > > /SUGGESTION > I think your suggestion sounds casual and more approaching, I still prefer Michaels for its clarity, though.
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