On Sun, Nov 10, 2013 at 6:36 PM, Jason Resch <[email protected]> wrote:
> Telmo,
>
> Thank you very much for that feedback; those are all good points and I will
> incorporate it into a new and improved version.
>
> Do you think it would be clearer if instead of a block of wood I used a very
> small (but light absorbing object), like a dust mote, or a single atom, etc.
> (something that more intuitively could be moved by light?)
>
> Perhaps I could built up with multiple levels, first the light hits an
> electron, which puts it into two states, and gives it two momentums, then
> the electron hits a phosphorescent screen, which puts it into multiple
> states of illumination, and then the person looking at the screeen is
> finally put into two states?

Yeah, I would prefer this. Even if the sequence of events is a bit
more complicated, I think the overall cognitive load is lower because
you never have to suspend disbelief.

Another thing I noticed: you say at one point that the light behaves
like red light but there's never a "payoff" for this bit of
information.

Telmo.

> Jason
>
>
>
> On Sun, Nov 10, 2013 at 11:19 AM, Telmo Menezes <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>>
>> Thanks Jason, nice work!
>>
>> A few comments:
>>
>> - It's not obvious what's going on when the block of wood turns into
>> two. Even expecting the multiple outcomes, one does not intuitively
>> expect a beam of light to move a block of wood. I don't mind the
>> exaggeration but I suggest you make it explicit in the text and
>> indicate displacement in the figure somehow;
>>
>> - Numbering figures would be a great improvement;
>>
>> - You should sign your work!
>>
>> Best,
>> Telmo.
>>
>> On Sun, Nov 10, 2013 at 10:49 AM, Jason Resch <[email protected]>
>> wrote:
>> > All,
>> >
>> > I've put together a primer on QM, as I think in the process of
>> > explaining
>> > something in simple terms can help improve one's understanding of a
>> > given
>> > subject.  I thought I would share it with this list in case it might
>> > help
>> > anyone else. I also welcome any feedback anyone has to offer regarding
>> > it.
>> >
>> > Jason
>> >
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