Eimii wrote:
I keep meaning to write a detailed C&C of this, and time keeps slipping
away.
So, before its been too long, I just want to give some quick comments.
The new scene was awesome. As you've been reposting the reworked
chapters, this has been my favorite so far. The other reviewer was
right, it even retroactively made the last chapter (which was a bit more
than pretty decent in it's own right) even better.
I've noticed this, actually. You do really, really well at conversation.
Most fanfic authors can't manage to have two characters just sit down
and chat and make it utterly engrossing. The more your characters are
talking, the more awesome the scene is.
William
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