Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nvo3-encap-10

Hi Meral, Thanks for noting the two typos you found below. I have fixed them in my working copy so they will be fixed the next time I upload a revision. Donald === Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-intarea-rfc7042bis-09

Hi Dale, Thanks for this review. See below. On Fri, Oct 6, 2023 at 4:05 PM Dale Worley via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Dale Worley > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-eastlake-rfc6931bis-xmlsec-uris-19

Hi Peter, Thank you for your detailed review of this somewhat lengthy draft! Sorry for my slow response, I've been on vacation at www.discon3.org. On Tue, Dec 14, 2021 at 6:24 PM Peter Yee via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-oam-req-frmwk-04

Hi Dave, Thanks for the review. See below. On Fri, Feb 5, 2021 at 4:44 PM David Schinazi via Datatracker wrote: > Reviewer: David Schinazi > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-allan-5g-fmc-encapsulation-04

Hi Russ, Thanks for the review. See my responses as one co-author below. On Fri, Jul 3, 2020 at 12:33 PM Russ Housley via Datatracker wrote: > > Reviewer: Russ Housley > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART)

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-over-ip-15

Hi Matthew, On Thu, Mar 8, 2018 at 1:59 AM, Matthew Miller wrote: > Reviewer: Matthew Miller > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-vendor-channel-00

Hi Joel, On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 1:24 PM, Joel Halpern wrote: > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-ecn-support-04

Hi Dan, Thanks for your review. Donald === Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Sun, Feb 4, 2018 at 7:01 AM, Dan Romascanu wrote: > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-address-flush-05

HI Robert, On Fri, Jan 26, 2018 at 3:29 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06

Hi Meral, On Thu, Dec 21, 2017 at 7:20 PM, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-10.txt

On Thu, Jan 4, 2018 at 6:13 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Francis, > > I believe your comments are resolved in the -10 version of this draft. I > expect a -11 version to be posted soon with a few other minor improvements. > So, you might want to check th

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-10.txt

Hi Francis, I believe your comments are resolved in the -10 version of this draft. I expect a -11 version to be posted soon with a few other minor improvements. So, you might want to check the current -10 version or the -11 version when it is posted. Thanks, Donald

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-arp-optimization-08

Hi Dale, Thanks for the review. See below. On Wed, Jun 28, 2017 at 10:35 PM, Dale Worley wrote: > Reviewer: Dale Worley > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-06

Hi Stewart, Thanks for the comments. See below. On Wed, Jun 28, 2017 at 2:06 PM, Stewart Bryant wrote: > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation-05

Hi Brian, Thanks for the comments. See below. On Fri, Jun 23, 2017 at 9:32 PM, Brian Carpenter wrote: > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review result: Ready with Issues > > Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation-05 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-04

Hi Christer, Version -05 of the draft, which was just posted, is intended to resolve your comments. Thanks, Donald === Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Thu, Jan 19, 2017 at 7:47 AM,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-04

Hi Christer, On Wed, Jan 18, 2017 at 6:07 PM, Christer Holmberg wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-directory-assist-mechanisms-10.txt

Hi Francis, See below. On Mon, Jan 9, 2017 at 9:05 AM, Francis Dupont wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv

Hi Paul, On Wed, Jul 6, 2016 at 1:34 PM, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu> wrote: > Donald, > > On 7/5/16 9:51 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote: >> >> Hi Paul, >> >> Version -09 has been uploaded with the intent that it resolve your >> comments. &g

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt

Hi, These are all fixed in version -14 except that the last comment re Section 7.1 to make the change "TENANT-LABEL -> TENANT-GWMAC-LABEL" still has a tiny glitch in it. In particular, there is an extra space just before "GWMAC" so it's "TENANT- GWMAC-LABEL". This certainly does not seem worth a

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv

yzi...@alum.mit.edu> wrote: > On 7/4/16 11:35 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote: >> >> Hi Paul, >> >> I believe we are generally in agreement. >> >> On the table in the IANA Considerations, I have read >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-leiba-cotton-iana-522

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

Hi Peter, Version -10 has been uploaded with the intent of resolved your GENART review comments. Thanks, Donald === Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Tue, Jul 5, 2016 at 4:06 PM, Peter Yee

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv

(cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Mon, Jul 4, 2016 at 6:50 PM, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu> wrote: > Donald, > > On 7/4/16 5:26 PM, Donald Eastlake wrote: >> >> Hi Paul, >> >> Thanks for your comments. Sorry for the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv

Hi Paul, Thanks for your comments. Sorry for the delay in response. Please see below. On Mon, Jun 27, 2016 at 6:46 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

Hi Peter, Thanks for your thorough review. See below. On Sat, Jul 2, 2016 at 2:33 AM, Peter Yee wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair.

Re: [Gen-art] Genart LC (and likely telechat) review : draft-ietf-trill-tree-selection-04

Hi Robert, A version -05 has been uploaded with the intent that it resolve your comments. Thanks, Donald === Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Wed, Jun 29, 2016 at 4:09 PM, Donald Eastlake

Re: [Gen-art] Genart LC (and likely telechat) review : draft-ietf-trill-tree-selection-04

Hi Robert, Thanks for your thorough comments. See below. On Tue, Jun 28, 2016 at 3:33 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt

Hi Francis, Thanks for the review. See some responses below. On Wed, Jun 22, 2016 at 10:22 AM, Francis Dupont wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-08

Hi Peter, On Sun, Dec 27, 2015 at 8:30 PM, Peter Yee <pe...@akayla.com> wrote: > Hi Donald, > > Responses below. > > -Original Message- > From: Donald Eastlake [mailto:d3e...@gmail.com] > Sent: Sunday, December 27, 2015 4:31 PM > To: Peter Yee

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-08

Hi Peter, Thanks for the comments, see below. On Thu, Dec 24, 2015 at 8:27 PM, Peter Yee wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc7180bis-06

ee in-line for a few more >> comments. >> >> Best, >> Meral >> >>> -Original Message- >>> From: Donald Eastlake [mailto:d3e...@gmail.com] >>> Sent: Wednesday, October 21, 2015 7:54 AM >>> To: Meral Shirazipour >>> Cc: draft

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc7180bis-06

Hi Meral, On Mon, Oct 19, 2015 at 8:02 PM, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. > > > Please resolve these

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-pseudonode-nickname-05

On Fri, Sep 18, 2015 at 9:49 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: > Donald, > >>> (Maybe this helps: I’m not actually sure why in a k-element set you order >>> them based mod k because that would seem to produce likely >>> duplicates. Since your backup option in the case of duplicates

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-pseudonode-nickname-05

Hi Jari, On Thu, Sep 17, 2015 at 9:22 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: > Thanks for the in-depth review, Russ! Very much appreciated. > > I believe we still has to resolve what to do about the sort order. > > (Maybe this helps: I’m not actually sure why in a k-element set you order >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-pseudonode-nickname-05

See below: On Fri, Sep 11, 2015 at 12:17 PM, Russ Housley wrote: > Donald: > Document: draft-ietf-trill-pseudonode-nickname-05 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2015-08-24 IETF LC End Date: 2015-09-01 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-trill-pseudonode-nickname-05

Hi Sandra, On Mon, Aug 31, 2015 at 4:20 PM, Sandra Murphy wrote: > On Aug 27, 2015, at 5:59 PM, Russ Housley wrote: > >> >> (3) In Section 11, we learn that the VLAN membership of all the >> RBridge ports in an LAALP MUST be the same. Any

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05

...@isode.com wrote: On 04/08/2014 18:16, Donald Eastlake wrote: Hi Alexey, Hi Donald, On Sun, Aug 3, 2014 at 2:30 PM, Alexey Melnikov alexey.melni...@isode.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05

Hi Alexey, On Sun, Aug 3, 2014 at 2:30 PM, Alexey Melnikov alexey.melni...@isode.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq Please resolve these comments along with any

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-esadi-06.txt

Thanks, --David -Original Message- From: Donald Eastlake [mailto:d3e...@gmail.com] Sent: Saturday, April 05, 2014 11:23 AM To: Black, David Cc: zhai.hong...@zte.com.cn; hu.fang...@zte.com.cn; ra...@alum.mit.edu; osto...@extremenetworks.com; General Area Review Team (gen-art@ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-esadi-06.txt

Hi David, Thanks for this very thorough review. See my responses below: On Sat, Mar 29, 2014 at 10:23 PM, Black, David david.bl...@emc.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc6326bis-01

On Jan 20, 2014, at 8:11 PM, Alexey Melnikov alexey.melni...@isode.com wrote: Hi Donald, On 20/01/2014 16:45, Donald Eastlake wrote: Hi Alexey, Thanks for your review, see below: On Mon, Jan 20, 2014 at 6:12 AM, Alexey Melnikov alexey.melni...@isode.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc6326bis-01

Hi Alexey, Thanks for your review, see below: On Mon, Jan 20, 2014 at 6:12 AM, Alexey Melnikov alexey.melni...@isode.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Yuletide LC review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6327bis-02.txt

Hi Elwyn, Seasons Greetings! On Mon, Dec 23, 2013 at 5:00 PM, Elwyn Davies elw...@dial.pipex.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-o-pw-03

Hi Christer, Thanks for this review. See below. On Saturday, December 14, 2013, Christer Holmberg wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq Document:

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-trill-oam-framework-03.txt

Hi, Thanks for the review. Below are my responses. Hopefully my co-authors will agree. On Mon, Nov 25, 2013 at 9:25 AM, Francis Dupont francis.dup...@fdupont.fr wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-directory-framework-05

Hi David, Thanks for the review. See responses below. On Wed, Jul 17, 2013 at 7:54 PM, Black, David david.bl...@emc.com wrote: Document: draft-ietf-trill-directory-framework-05 Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: July 17, 2013 IETF LC End Date: July 18, 2013 Summary: This draft is on

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-eastlake-rfc5342bis-03

Hi David, On Sun, Jun 9, 2013 at 1:47 PM, Black, David david.bl...@emc.com wrote: The -03 version of this draft resolves all of the concerns raised by the Gen-ART review of the -02 version. Thanks. Unfortunately, a serious typo/thinko snuck into the -03 version (been there, done that,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04

Hi Meral, On Tue, Jul 3, 2012 at 12:18 PM, Meral Shirazipour meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please wait for direction from

[Gen-art] Fwd: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-03.txt

Hi Meral, A real response this time... Thanks for your thorough review. See below: On Tue, Jun 19, 2012 at 11:51 AM, Meral Shirazipour meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-03.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-channel-06.txt

Hi Miguel, On Tue, Jun 19, 2012 at 3:26 AM, Miguel A. Garcia miguel.a.gar...@ericsson.com wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-03.txt

Hi Meral, Thanks for your review. See below: On Tue, Jun 19, 2012 at 11:51 AM, Meral Shirazipour meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-03.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-03.txt

Sorry, ignore below, hit send by mistake On Tue, Jun 19, 2012 at 2:18 PM, Donald Eastlake d3e...@gmail.com wrote: Hi Meral, Thanks for your review. See below: On Tue, Jun 19, 2012 at 11:51 AM, Meral Shirazipour meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-extension-04

Hi Ben, On Fri, Jun 1, 2012 at 3:18 PM, Ben Campbell b...@nostrum.com wrote: Thanks for the quick response. Further comments inline. I deleted sections that do not appear to need further discussion. Thanks! Ben. On Jun 1, 2012, at 10:45 AM, Donald Eastlake wrote: Hi Ben, Thanks

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-extension-04

Hi Ben, Thanks for your review. See responses below. On Thu, May 31, 2012 at 6:08 PM, Ben Campbell b...@nostrum.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsext-5395bis-02.txt

Thanks. This is supposed to be a minor revision to fix a changed mailing list and perhaps any other major problem. It does not seems like the version to start moving sections around.,.. Donald =  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)  155 Beaver Street  

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-protocol-14

Hi Peter, Thanks for the detailed review. See below, On Thu, Jan 7, 2010 at 3:13 PM, McCann Peter-A001034 pete.mcc...@motorola.com wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see