Bill; I Thank you for your feedback, but in this case I do not accept your correction your correction as it does not correspond to the insight of the Diamond Sutra. Zen poetry can be understood by intelectual but through mindfulness, concentration and insight. My poem tries to transmit in a very basic way, the truth about interbeing while yours keeps on the individual self. However, perhaps there is an English error and it should be reading:
I am you You are me we are One Mayka --- In [email protected], "Mayka" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > I am you > You is me > We are One > Mayka > Current Book Discussion: any Zen book that you recently have read or are reading! Talk about it today! Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/ <*> Your email settings: Individual Email | Traditional <*> To change settings online go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Zen_Forum/join (Yahoo! ID required) <*> To change settings via email: mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: [EMAIL PROTECTED] <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
