Very nice poem. It does reflect a message of Zen appropriately. Your poem has been a blessing to me. Thank you for it. However, I am not sure that Bill was necessarily making a comment about your poem. Remember, as the Diamond Sutra indicates, that there are no things. There is no Interbeing, there is no mindfulness, there is no enlightenment or Buddha nature. These are merely concepts that serve a purpose, like the finger pointing to the moon, these words are instruments that help us to see into true reality. This is the message of the Diamond sutra as well. So if Bill takes a more self focused view of reality, is that necessarily any different from your focus on interbeing? Happiness to You Mayka, Allen Mayka <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: More English errors corrected:
-- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com, "Mayka" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > > Bill; > > I Thank you for your feedback, but in this case I do not accept your > correction as it does not correspond to the insight of > the Diamond Sutra. Zen poetry can not be understood by intelectual but > through mindfulness, concentration and insight. My poem tries to > transmit in a very basic way, the truth about interbeing while yours > keeps on the individual self. However, perhaps there is an English > error and it should be reading: > > I am you > > You are me > > we are One > > Mayka > > --- In Zen_Forum@yahoogroups.com, "Mayka" <flordeloto@> wrote: > > > > I am you > > You is me > > We are One > > Mayka > > > --------------------------------- Sucker-punch spam with award-winning protection. Try the free Yahoo! Mail Beta.