Adam I did not find your blog entry difficult to understand I found it cumbersome to get through.

Making information easily and accessible to a wider range of audience would seem an obvious approach someone in this business. We have not had the opportunity to have a verbal conversation so I wouldn't know how your writing reconciles. But I would grade any undergraduate paper (or above) with it's ability to communicate as secondary only to core content. [ http://tinyurl.com/ydqtcje ]

I'm not a critic and far from an expert in the written word, just a focus group of one offering an observation. But I am pretty sure I share many attributes of your intended audience.

mark


On Dec 13, 2009, at 1:38 PM, Adam Greenfield wrote:

Would I need an editor, if I intended these words to wind up in
print? Absolutely. But is my writing *inherently* arcane? No, it
isn't. It's about par for the kind of material any undergraduate
can expect to confront at any university worth the name, and if you
have a problem with that, mark schraad, then maybe you should
consider that the problem is yours and not mine.

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