Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2017-04-30 Thread J.wuensch
- Original Message Subject: Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script Local Time: 24. April 2017 8:18 PM UTC Time: 24. April 2017 18:18 From: aa...@snowdrift.coop To: design@lists.snowdrift.coop On 04/23/2017 02:01 PM, J.wuensch wrote: > Sorry for no updates on my side! Last month was cr

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2017-04-24 Thread Aaron Wolf
On 04/23/2017 02:01 PM, J.wuensch wrote: > Sorry for no updates on my side! Last month was crazily busy. I work in > a young start-up company and we had to prepare A LOT of stuff for a > fair. So I had to pause working on the snowdrift video. I told Robert > but I think it would have been better

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2017-04-24 Thread mray
On 23.04.2017 23:01, J.wuensch wrote: > Sorry for no updates on my side! Last month was crazily busy. I work in a > young start-up company and we had to prepare A LOT of stuff for a fair. So I > had to pause working on the snowdrift video. I told Robert but I think it > would have been better

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2017-04-23 Thread J.wuensch
Sorry for no updates on my side! Last month was crazily busy. I work in a young start-up company and we had to prepare A LOT of stuff for a fair. So I had to pause working on the snowdrift video. I told Robert but I think it would have been better to communicate it here on the mailing list.

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2016-12-03 Thread Stephen Michel
On Sat, Dec 3, 2016 at 2:16 PM, Michael Siepmann wrote: On 12/01/2016 07:52 AM, mray wrote: On 30.11.2016 07:30, Aaron Wolf wrote: tentative 4a. "Our innovative platform empowers you to join with others to fund the public goods /you/ care about." tentative 4b.

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2016-12-03 Thread Michael Siepmann
On 12/01/2016 07:52 AM, mray wrote: > On 30.11.2016 07:30, Aaron Wolf wrote: >> tentative 4a. "Our innovative platform empowers you to join with others >> to fund the public goods /you/ care about." >> >> tentative 4b. "At Snowdrift.coop, you collaborate with others to build >> greater support

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2016-12-01 Thread mray
On 30.11.2016 07:30, Aaron Wolf wrote: > tentative 4a. "Our innovative platform empowers you to join with others > to fund the public goods /you/ care about." > > tentative 4b. "At Snowdrift.coop, you collaborate with others to build > greater support for public goods." > > I'm not happy with

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2016-11-26 Thread Stephen Michel
On Fri, Nov 25, 2016 at 11:11 PM, Michael Siepmann wrote: I'm thinking that in this super-short intro, it would be better to omit any reference to a snowdrift. It's just too confusing, not necessary enough, and doesn't help to engage people right away. People can

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2016-11-26 Thread J.wuensch
I really like this script and I also think that this works better for the short version. Well done Michael! Original Message Subject: Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script Local Time: November 26, 2016 5:11 AM UTC Time: November 26, 2016 4:11 AM From: m

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2016-11-26 Thread mray
On 26.11.2016 05:11, Michael Siepmann wrote: > > On 11/25/2016 10:17 AM, Aaron Wolf wrote: >> With the updated first line: SCRIPT2C/ The snowdrift dilemma: Regardless of who clears the snow, we all benefit. So, who will do the work? This public goods

Re: [Snowdrift-design] Intro video script

2016-11-24 Thread Aaron Wolf
On 11/24/2016 01:52 AM, mray wrote: > > Thank you Aaron! > I like the script. > > >> The snowdrift dilemma asks: who will clear the public road when we all >> get the results whether or not we help? > > * "get the results" sounds very neutral. "benefit from it" would a > positive connotation