Review is partially done. Another assignment may be needed to complete it.
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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-15.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20200311
IETF LC End Date: 20200310
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Summary: Ready
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Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sdi-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20200212
IETF LC End Date: 20200218
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Summary: Almost Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: crypto use details are missing. IMHO it is a problem of
presen
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-intarea-provisioning-domains-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20191220
IETF LC End Date: 20191225
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 3.1 page 6: th
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-hip-dex-11.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20191107
IETF LC End Date: 20191114
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1.2 page 6: highligts -> highlig
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rmr-12.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20191028
IETF LC End Date: 20191105
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Requirement Language page 1: please
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-payload-tsvcis-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190918
IETF LC End Date: 20190925
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1.1 page 3: add RFC 8174 with RF
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-tls-grease-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190803
IETF LC End Date: 20190812
IESG Telechat date: 20190822
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 8 p
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-13.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190704
IETF LC End Date: 20190708
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- spelling: 1 page 2, 2 pag
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190633
IETF LC End Date: 20190626
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1 page 3: the IT abbrev
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: Ready
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2019/05/11
IETF LC End Date: 2019/05/21
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2: bad padding in 2. and 2.1. titles in text
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-18.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190228
IETF LC End Date: 20190307
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 3 and 7 p
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190207
IETF LC End Date: 20190213
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1 page 2: expand th
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-curdle-gss-keyex-sha2-08
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2019-01-08
IETF LC End Date: 2019-01-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- sec
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-ietf-clue-protocol-17.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20181017
IETF LC End Date: 20181017
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
I have a problem with the CLUE
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20181005
IETF LC End Date: 20181010
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
I reviewed the version 06 b
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-mw-yang-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180926
IETF LC End Date: 20181002
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
The yang model mixes config, sta
of the draft.
For more information, please see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-17.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180911
IESG Telechat date: 20180927
Summary: Ready with Nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues
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Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180616
IETF LC End Date: 20180619
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Summary: Ready with Nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 6 a
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180512
IETF LC End Date: 20180521
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Summary: Ready with nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues: Missing keyword section (aka RFC 2119 section).
BTW
the draft.
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Document: draft-ietf-secevent-token-08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180419
IETF LC End Date: 201805xx
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor
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Document: draft-housley-suite-b-to-historic-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180315
IETF LC End Date: 20180316
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Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Abstract page 1: double
see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180315
IESG Telechat date: 20180320
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 5 page 6 (wording): an
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180225
IETF LC End Date: 20180228
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
(I took my notes on version
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-hip-dex-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180224
IETF LC End Date: 20180226
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 3: you use the US spell
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-sidr-slurm-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180217
IETF LC End Date: 20180221
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 6 page 14
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-bess-fat-pw-bgp-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2018/02/07
IETF LC End Date: 20180209
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Abstract page 1: please exp
see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8022bis-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180123
IETF LC End Date: 20180115
IESG Telechat date: 20180125
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial co
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171221
IETF LC End Date: 20180102
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 10
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-10.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171209
IETF LC End Date: 20171212
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready with Issues
Major issues: None
Minor issues: C-nickname is used before being defined
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-as-instanceid-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171124
IETF LC End Date: 20171208
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171024
IETF LC End Date: 20171024
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1.1 page 3: please upgrade th
RFC 8174 (Ambiguity of Uppercase vs Lowercase in RFC 2119 Key Words)
published in May solved the lower case 2119 keyword issue but
should we recommend draft authors to use the RFC 8174 updated
standard section about the use of 2119 keywords?
IMHO yes at it is the simplest. Note the RFC Editor shoul
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-bgpsec-rollover-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171007
IETF LC End Date: 20171017
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
IMHO the language itself
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171002
IETF LC End Date: 20171009
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 11 p
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-dawkins-iesg-nomcom-advisor-iaoc-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170929
IETF LC End Date: 20171016
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 7
see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-taps-transports-usage-udp-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2017-09-14
IETF LC End Date: done
IESG Telechat date: 2017-09-14
Summary: In the Right Track
Major issues: None
Minor
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review result: On the Right Track
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170710
IETF LC End Date: 20170718
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 2 page 3 (twice) and 2.1
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-lsp-fastreroute-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170706
IETF LC End Date: 20170707
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-bormann-hybi-ws-wk-00.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170626
IETF LC End Date: 20170719
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2: Acknowledg
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-sacm-requirements-15.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170607
IETF LC End Date: 20170605
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Almost Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: ambiguous uses of lowercase keywords:
RFC 2119 i
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-name-addr-guidance-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170601
IETF LC End Date: 20170601
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 2 and 3 page
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170516
IETF LC End Date: 20170515
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready with Nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1 page 2:
see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170509
IETF LC End Date: 20170302
IESG Telechat date: 20170511
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/edi
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-08.txt
Reviewer: F
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-server-security-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170303
IETF LC End Date: 20170313
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 3 pages 3-4: th
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-dmm-lma-controlled-mag-params-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170217
IETF LC End Date: 20170224
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review result: Ready with Issues
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Document: draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170210
IETF LC End Date: 20170214
IESG Telechat date: 20170224
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 1 and 3 page 3
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-freytag-lager-variant-rules-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170121
IETF LC End Date: 20170214
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Not Ready
Major issues: this document is not understable at all without a
previous reading of R
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-nd-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170116
IETF LC End Date: 20170123
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready with nits
Major issues: none
Minor issues: the title (and the Abstract) is a bit misleading: it is
n
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review result: Ready
draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14 already reviewed for Last Call
and the few nits were addressed in newer versions.
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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170106
IETF LC End Date: 2017012
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready with Nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues: please consider to publish this as a B
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-trill-directory-assist-mechanisms-10.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170105
IETF LC End Date: 2017019
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1.1
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-holmberg-dispatch-received-realm-08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20161103
IETF LC End Date: 20161123
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Almost Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: the wording should be improved by a
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-roll-routing-dispatch-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20161025
IETF LC End Date: 20161019
IESG Telechat date: 20161027
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 1 page 3: w
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-murchison-nntp-compress-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160922
IETF LC End Date: 20161010
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and A p
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-core-http-mapping-13.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160829
IETF LC End Date: 20160822
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Abstract page 1:
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-mux-exclusive-08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160707
IETF LC End Date: 20160708
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 4.4 page 5: I
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-trill-irb-13.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160618
IETF LC End Date: 20160624
IESG Telechat date: 20150630
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- you have 6 (with a soft
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-14.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160525
IETF LC End Date: 20160523
IESG Telechat date: 20160602
Summary: Ready with nits
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
- I
In your previous mail you wrote:
> > The authors are in California. You will not see their response until
> > after the IESG meeting.
=> they are editorial comments: in the worst case they'll be handled
by the RFC Editor...
Thanks
francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
_
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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160429
IETF LC End Date: 20160429
IESG Telechat date: 20160505
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Abstract
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160331
IETF LC End Date: 20160405
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- in ToC page 2 a
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-avtext-sdes-hdr-ext-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160319
IETF LC End Date: 20160318
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
Spelling:
- ToC
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc-12.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160226
IETF LC End Date: 20160224
IESG Telechat date: 20160303
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC 3 and B p
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-mahesh-mef-urn-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2016-01-25
IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-04
IESG Telechat date: 2016-02-04
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- I was first surpised
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5203-bis-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20151218
IETF LC End Date: 20151228
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 2 page 3: (comme
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20151112
IETF LC End Date: 20151117
IESG Telechat date: 20151203
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
(very
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20151026
IETF LC End Date: 20151023
IESG Telechat date: 20151119
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 3 and D p
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-cdni-media-type-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20151002
IETF LC End Date: 20151013
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- In 1 page 2: th
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-bess-spbm-evpn-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150925
IETF LC End Date: 20150924
IESG Telechat date: 20151001
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Abstract page 1: my
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150911
IETF LC End Date: 20150923
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-additional-data-34.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150828
IETF LC End Date: 20150824
IESG Telechat date: 20150903
Summary: Almost Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
This document uses and even redefines RF
ing-07.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150710
IETF LC End Date: 20150708
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Abstract page 1: usually there is no very explicit reference to the
RFC the document obsoletes. IMH
equery-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150701
IETF LC End Date: 20150629
IESG Telechat date: 20150709
Summary: Almost Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: the TLS part is a bit underspecified (nothing critical
as the missing text should get a quick and easy consensus)
Nits/edi
etwork-identifier-08.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150601
IETF LC End Date: 20150609
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 10 page 16: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
(BTW you wrote behavior, not
06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150515
IETF LC End Date: 20150513
IESG Telechat date: 20150514??
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
I reviewed the 06 version.
- 1 page 3: signalling -> signaling
- 4.1 page 5: after the terminology sect
viewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150418
IETF LC End Date: 20150420
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready with nits
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments: many!
- Abstract page 1: a standardized services:
either 'a standardized service' or '
15.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150402
IETF LC End Date: 20150402
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
I reviewed the 15 version but I can see the 16 one is already available
so I'll try to update my comments.
p-wson-signaling-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150313
IETF LC End Date: 20150318
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting
to send these few comments
-im-12.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150226
IETF LC End Date: 20150302
IESG Telechat date: 20150305
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and Appendix A page 11: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
- 1 page 2: even its m
02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150213
IETF LC End Date: 20150218
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready with nits
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
There are a heavy use of abbrevs. Note abbrevs are registered under
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc
f-mpvd-arch-10.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150213
IETF LC End Date: 20150206
IESG Telechat date: 20150219
Summary: Ready with issues
Please look at my preceeding message about draft-ietf-mif-mpvd-arch-09.txt
for the minor issue and editorial comments.
Regards
francis.dup...@fdup
09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150212
IETF LC End Date: 20150206
IESG Telechat date: 20150219
Summary: Almost Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: the authentication in DHCPv6 (RFC 3315 section 21)
is considered in the document as a strong authentication.
I have to disagree with th
-l3vpn-acceptown-community-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150206
IETF LC End Date: 20141208
IESG Telechat date: 20150205
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- Abstract page 1: VRF and PE are not well known abbrevs
(cf http://www.rfc-editor.o
In your previous mail you wrote:
> Thanks for your review and good comments.
>
> Please see inline for my comment. Let me know if the draft can move on
> or not after your review.
=> I am not a member of the IESG, I am just in a team reviewing drafts
in last call or before the IESG review (
traint-encode-16.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20150107
IETF LC End Date: 20150117
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- you use a strange indentation for sub sections... Perhaps it is from
the tempate?? Anyway it w
aps-07.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20141224
IETF LC End Date: 20141224
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
5 page 4: in "its lower layer should provide this"
the term "should" is ambiguous, i.
231-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20141104
IETF LC End Date: 20141106
IESG Telechat date: 20141125
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 7 page 5: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
(BTW what is the favorite spelling
03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20141025
IETF LC End Date: 20141027
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 5 page 18: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
- 3.2.6 page 8: singaling -> signali
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